त्रिवेणी (काव्य विधा)

triveni ek tin panktiyoan vali kavita hai. aisa mana jata hai ki prasiddh gitakar aur kavi gulazar sahab ne is vidha ko vikasit kiya tha. kuchh log is vidha ki tulana japan ki ek kavy vidha 'haiku' se karate haian.

• kuchh log 'triveni' ko ise japani 'haiku' ka svadeshi sanskaran bhi kahate haian, parantu yah poornatah svadesh mean vikasit vidha hai tatha japani kavy vidha haiku se bhinn svatantr vidha hai.
• 'haiku' aur 'triveni' mean keval itani samanata hai ki donoan mean matr tin panktiyaan hoti haian. in tin paktiyoan ki samyata ke atirikt adhik in donoan vidhaoan mean any koee samy nahian hai.
• 'triveni' ki rachana ka mool prerana srot bhi japani kavy hi kaha jata hai. vaise gulazar sahab ne isake sanbandh mean apani triveni sangrah rachana 'triveni' ke prakashan ke avasar par isaki paribhasha is prakar di thi-

"shuroo-shuroo mean to jab yah ph aaurm banaee thi, to pata nahian tha yah kis sangam tak pahuanchegi. 'triveni' nam isilie diya tha ki pahale do misare, ganga-jamuna ki tarah milate haian aur ek khyal, ek sher ko mukammal karate haian. lekin in do dharaoan ke niche ek aur nadi hai - sarasvati, jo gupt hai nazar nahian ati. 'triveni' ka kam sarasvati dikhana hai. tisara misara kahian pahale do misaroan mean gupt hai, chhupa hua hai. 1972-1973 mean jab kamaleshvar ji sarika ke editar the, tab triveniyaan sarika mean chhapati rahian aur ab 'triveni' ko balig hote-hote sattaees-atthaees sal lag ge."

japani 'haiku' mean jahaan tin panktiyoan mean kramanusar 5+7+5 kul milakar keval 17 varnoan mean vichar aankit karane ki badhyata hai, vahian triveni vidha mean aisi koee baghyata n hokar tin layavaddh panktiyoan mean vichar vyakt karane hote haian. is prakar tin paktiyoan ki samyata ke atirikt in donoan vidhaoan mean any koee samy nahian hai.

udaharan-

thahar kar
dekhi iansaniyat
thithuri huee

• gulazar sahab ki 'triveni'-

gole, barood, ag, bam, nare
bazi atish ki shahar mean garm hai
bandh kholo ki aj sab "band" hai

panne ki pragati avastha

adhar

prarambhik

madhyamik

poornata

shodh

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