प्रतापसाहि
- pratapasahi 'ratanasen bandijan' ke putr the aur charakhari, buandelakhand ke maharaj 'vikramasahi' ke yahaan rahate the.
- inhoanne sanvat 1882 mean 'vyangyarth kaumudi' aur sanvat 1886 mean 'kavy vilas' ki rachana ki. in donoan param prasiddh granthoan ke atirikt nimnalikhit pustakean inaki likhi huee haian-
- jayasianh prakash [1],
- shrriangaramanjari [2],
- shrriangar shiromani [3],
- alankar chiantamani [4],
- kavy vinod [5],
- rasaraj ki tika [6],
- ratnachandrika [7],
- jugal nakhashikh [8],
- balabhadr nakhashikh ki tika.
- inaka kavita kal sanvat 1880 se 1900 tak thaharata hai.
- inaki rachanaoan se inaki sahityamarmajnata aur paandity ka anuman hota hai. acharyatv mean inaka nam matiram, shripati aur bhikhari das ke sath ata hai aur ek drishti se inhoanne unake chalae hue kary ko poornata ko pahuanchaya tha. lakshana vyanjana ka udaharanoan dvara vistrit niroopan poorvavarti tin kaviyoan ne nahian kiya tha. inhoanne vyanjana ke udaharanoan ki ek alag pustak hi 'vyangyarth kaumudi' ke nam se rachi. isamean kavitt, dohe, savaiye milakar 130 pady haian jo sab vyanjana ya dhvani ke udaharan haian.
- nayikaoan ke bhedoan, rasadi ke sab aangoan tatha bhinn-bhinn bandho upaman ka abhyas n rakhane vale ke lie aise pady paheli hi samajhie. udaharan ke lie 'vyangyarth kaumudi' ka savaiya -
sikh sikhaee n manati hai, bar hi bas sang sakhin ke avai.
khelat khel ne jal mean, bina kam britha kat jam bitavai
chho di kai sath sahelin ko, rahi kai kahi kaun savadahi pavai.
kaun pari yah bani, ari! nit nirabhari gagari dharakavai
- gh de ke pani mean apane netroan ka pratibianb dekh use machhaliyoan ka bhram hota hai. is prakar ka bhram ek alankar hai. at: bhram ya bhraanti alankar, yahaan vyangy hua. 'bhram' alankar mean 'sadrishy' vyangy raha karata hai at: ab is vyangyarth par pahuanche ki 'netr min ke saman haian'.
- pratapasahi ka kavy kaushal apoorv hai. unhoanne ek ras granth ke anuroop nayika bhed ke kram se sab pady rakhe haian jisase unake granth ko ji chahe to nayika bhed ka ek atyant saras aur madhur granth bhi kah sakate haian.
- acharyatv aur kavitv donoan ke ek anoothe sanyog ki drishti se matiram, shripati aur das se ye kuchh bis hi thaharate haian.
- bhasha ki snigdh sukh saral gati, kalpana ki moortimatta aur hriday ki dravanashilata matiram, shripati aur beni pravin ke jati hai to udhar acharyatv in tinoan mean bhi aur das se bhi kuchh age dikhaee p data hai. inaki prakhar pratibha ne mano padmakar ki pratibha ke sath ritibaddh kavyakala ko poornata par pahuanchakar chho d diya. padmakar ki anupras yojana kabhi kabhi ruchikar sima ke bahar ja p di hai, par is bhavuk aur pravin ki vani mean yah dosh kahian nahian ane paya hai. inaki bhasha mean b da gun yah hai ki yah barabar ek saman chalati hai, usamean n kahian kritrim adanbar hai, n gati ka shaithily aur n shabdoan ki to d maro d.
- hindi ke muktak kaviyoan mean samasyapoorti ki paddhati par rachana karane ke karan ek atyant pratyaksh dosh dekhane mean ata hai. unake aantim charan ki bhasha to bahut hi ganthi huee, vyavasthit aur marmikahai par shesh tin charanoan mean yah bat bahut hi kam hai. bahut se sthaloan par vaky rachana bilkul avyavasthit aur bahut si padayojana nirarthak haian. par 'pratap' ki bhasha ekaras chalati hai. in sab batoan ke vichar se ham pratap ji ko padmakar ke samakaksh hi bahut b da kavi manate haian.
chanchalata apani taji kai ras hi ras soan ras suandar pijiyo.
kooo kitek kahai tumasoan tinaki kahi batan ko n patijiyo
choj chavain ke suniyo n yahi ik meri kahi nit kijiyo.
manjul manjari pai hau, maliand! vichari kai bhar sanbhari kai dijiyo
t dapai t dita chahuan oran tean, chhiti chhaee samiran ki laharaian.
madamate maha girishriangan pai, gan manju mayooran ke kaharaian
inaki karani barani n parai, magaroor gumanan soan gaharaian.
ghan ye nabhamandal mean chhaharaian, ghaharaian kahuan jay, kahooan thaharaian
kani karai gurulogan ki, n sakhin ki sikhan hi man lavati.
aian d bhari aangarati khari, kat ghooanghat mean ne nain nachavati
manjan kai drig aanjan aauanjati, aang anang umang badhavati.
kaun subhav ri tero parayo, khin aauangan mean khin pauri mean avati
kaha jani, man mean manorath vichari kaun,
cheti kaun kaj, kaun hetu uthi aee prat.
kahai paratap chhin dolibo pagan kahooan,
aantar ko kholibo n bolibo hamaian suhat
nanad jithani satarani, anakhani ati,
ris kai risani, so n hamaian kachhu janijat.
chahau pal baith rahau, chahau uthi jav taun,
hamako hamari pari, boojhai ko tihari bat?
chanchal chapala charu chamakat charoan or,
jhoomi jhoomi dhaurava dharani parasat hai.
sital samir lagai dukhad viyoginh,
sanyoginh samaj sukhasaj sarasat hai
kahaian paratap ati nivi d aandheri maanh,
marag chalat nahi neku darasat hai.
jhum di jhalani chahuan kod tean um di aj,
dharadhar dharan apar barasat hai
maharaj ramaraj ravaro sajat dal,
hot mukh amal anandit mahes ke.
sevat darin kete gabbar ganim rahaian,
pannag patal tyoan hi daran khages ke
kahaian paratap dhara dhaansat trasat,
kasamasat kamath pithi kathin kales ke.
kaharat kol, haharat haian digis dal,
laharat siandhu, thaharat phan ses ke
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