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'अकेला' की ग़ज़लों में भरपूर शेरियत और तग़ज़्जुल है । छोटी बड़ी सभी प्रकार की बहरों मे उन्होंने नए नए प्रयोग किए हैं और वे खूब सफल भी हुए हैं । उनके शेरों में यह ख़ूबी है कि वे ख़ुद-ब-ख़ुद होठों पर आ जाते हैं जैसे कि यह शेर-
 
'अकेला' की ग़ज़लों में भरपूर शेरियत और तग़ज़्जुल है । छोटी बड़ी सभी प्रकार की बहरों मे उन्होंने नए नए प्रयोग किए हैं और वे खूब सफल भी हुए हैं । उनके शेरों में यह ख़ूबी है कि वे ख़ुद-ब-ख़ुद होठों पर आ जाते हैं जैसे कि यह शेर-
इक रूपये की तीन अठन्नी माँगेगी
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इक रुपये की तीन अठन्नी माँगेगी
 
इस दुनिया से लेना-देना कम रखना
 
इस दुनिया से लेना-देना कम रखना
 
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pragatishil kavi virendr khare ‘akela’ ka janm 18 agast sanh 1968 ko chhatarapur (m.pr.) ke theth dehati adivasi bahul paha doan evan jangaloan se ghire chhote se gaanv kishanagadh mean ek madhyamavargiy kayasth parivar mean hua . avadhesh pratap sianh vishvavidyalay, riva se itihas mean em. e. evan bi. ed. karane ke bad ve lambe samay tak chhatarapur shahar ke ashasakiy vidyalayoan mean adhyapan kary karate rahe sath hi niahshaktajanoan ki shiksha, prashikshan aur punarvas ke lie samarpit en. ji. o. ‘pragatishil vikalaang sansar, chhatarapur ke sanchalan evan vyavastha mean sakriy bhoomika nibhate rahe . vartaman mean ‘akela’ ji ek adhyapak ke roop mean shasan ko apani sevaean de rahe haian sath hi niahshaktajanoan ki seva evan lekhan ke kshetr mean sakriy haian .

‘akela’ ji ko lekhan ki prerana apane pita sv. shri purooshottam das ji se mili . jo bhajan-kirtan likhane mean kaphi roochi rakhate the yadyapi unaki koee kriti prakashit nahian huee . mata shrimati kamala devi bhi sahityik-saanskritik roochi ki haian. ‘akela’ ji ne sanh-1990 se gazal-git lekhan ki yatra shuroo ki jo anavarat jari hai . gazal sangrah ‘shesh bachi chauthaee rat’ (1999-ayan prakashan, dilli) ke prakashan ne gazal ke kshetr mean unhean sthapit kiya aur rashtriy khyati dilaee . doosare gazal-git sangrah [[‘subh ki dastak’ (2006-sarthak prakashan dilli) evan tisare gazal sangrah ‘aangaroan par shabanam’ (2012-ayan prakashan, dilli)]] ne unaki sahityik pahachan ko aur pukhtagi dete hue unhean desh ke pratham pankti ke hindi gazalakaroan ke bich kh da kar diya hai .

prakashit kritiyoan ke alava ‘akela’ ji ki bahut si rachanaean vasudha, vagarth, kathadesh, mahakata aanchal, srijan-path, rashtradharm, kadambini jaisi pratishthit patrikaoan mean bhi samay-samay par prakashit hokar prashansit hoti rahi haian . unhoanne kavi-sammelanoan, mushayaroan, kavy-goshthiyoan tatha akashavani ke madhyam se bhi kaphi lokapriyata hasil ki hai . desh ki anek sahityik sansthaoan dvara unhean puraskrit evan sammanit bhi kiya gaya hai .

apani gazaloan ke tikhe tevaroan ke karan virendr khare ‘akela’ bundelakhand ke dushyant kumar kahe jate haian . unaki gazaloan mean jivan ki sachchi-tapati-sulagati ag poori tejasvita ke sath vidyaman hai . ve desh aur samaj mean vyapt dukh-dardoan, abhavoan, asaphalataoan, visangatiyoan aur chhal-chhadmoan ko anoothe aandaz mean pesh kar apane pathakoan mean viparit paristhitiyoan se l dane ka hausala bhar dete haian . ‘akela‘ ji ki gazaloan ki visheshataoan ko rekhaankit karate hue prasiddh kavi d aau. kuanar bechain likhate haian-“ ‘akela’ ji ki gazalean vividh vishayoan par hone ke sath sath bahar adi ki drishti se nishkalank haian, unamean sahaj pravah bhi hai aur amit prabhav bhi . ye gazalean gazal ki yashasvi parampara mean rahakar ne vishayoan tatha ne pratikoan ki khoj karati haian . inamean yatharth ki sachchaee aur kalpana ki ooanchaee donoan ke darshan hote haian .” isi prakar ’akela’ ji ki gazal ke prabhav ka udghatan karate hue is daur ke shahanshahe gazal d aau. bashir badr kahate haian-“akela ki gazal vo lahar hai jo gazal ke samandar mean nee halachal paida karegi .” padmashri d aau. gopaladas ‘niraj’ kahate haian ki-“ akela ke sheroan mean yah khoobi hai ki ve khud-b-khud hothoan par a jate haian . ” charchit vyangyakar manik varma evan pratishthit sahityakar d aau. devavrat joshi ne bhi apani apani tippaniyoan mean ‘akela’ ko dushyat kumar ke bad ko ullekhaniy shayar niroopit kiya hai. spasht hai ki virendr khare ‘akela’ ne hindi gazal ko ne vishay, nee soch, ne pratik aur samyak shilpagat kasavat dekar is vidha ki ullekhaniy seva ki hai aur is kshetr mean apani vishisht pahachan qayam ki hai.

virendr khare 'akela' ke kuchh charchit sher

 
        1-
        adavat dil mean rakhate haian magar yari dikhate haian
        n jane log bhi kya kya adakari dikhate hai
        2-
        hua savera hamean afatab mil hi gaya
        aandheri shab ko karara javab mil hi gaya
        3-
        jhooth-makkari tajean neta ji mumakin hi kahaan
        nachana, gana-bajana kaise kinnar chho d de
        4-
        kis qadar hai sust sarakari mulazim
        roz hi itavar pana chahata hai
        5-
        saik doan bar par ki hai nadi
        va re kagaz ki nav ki batean

        do qadam kaphila chala bhi nahian
        lo abhi se p dav ki batean
        6-.

        phir purani rah par ana pade़ga
        usako hindi mean hi samajhana p dega

        garm hai p aaukit tumhari bach ke jana
        lut n jana rah mean thana p dega
        7-
        bhale chauke n hoan do ek ran to aean balle se
        kee ovar ganva kar bhi kh de ho tum nithalle se

        jo qanoonan sahi haian unako karavana p da mushkil
        ki jin par rok hai vo kam hote haian dh dalle se
        8-
        pahale teri jeb tatoli jaegi
        phir yari ki bhasha boli jaegi

        naitikata ki maili hoti yah chadar
        daulat ke sabun se dho ji jaegi
        9-
        soch ki simaoan ke bahar mile
        prashn the kuchh aur kuchh uttar mile

        hamako ai janatantr tere nam par
        ustare thame hue bandar mile
        10-
        pyas do hi ghooant mean bujh jaegi
        sara dariya hai mire kis kam ka
        11-
               
        phir zamane mean kahian roosava meri chahat n ho
        karake vada bhoolane ki tujhako bhi adat n ho
        12-
        mana vo qatil hai par bedag bari ho jaega
        paisa ho to sab sambhav hai apane desh mahan mean
        janata ki takalifean sunane ka ye dhang nirala hai
        dekho baithe haian sahab ji rooee thooanse kan mean
        13-
        ek roope ki tin athanni maangegi
        is duniya se lena dena kam rakhana
        14-
        do qadam chalate haian ghantoan haanphate haian
        dekhiye sahib hamare rahabaroan ko
        15-
        parche hi lik hoan to kuchh kam ban sakega
        haian imtahan sar pe taiyariyaan nahian haian
        16-
        preyasi duniya bahut buri hai aur phir bahar chalana hai
        kya gardan par ye sone ka har bahut avashyak hai
        17-
        paanch sau ka dhara mez par
        jab vo dene laga afasari
        18-
        as gantavy ki kshirn p dane lagi
        path-pradarshak ko hai asthama bandhuo
        19-
        neta, vakil, pandit, mulla, samaj-sevak
        badalega roop akhir shaitan aur kitane
        20-
        haian jubanoan ki tak mean chhuriyaan
        aisi mushkil mean kaun lab khole
        21-
        chhapi chapaloosi, to sachchi khabar thi
        jo tanaqid nikali, to akhabar jhootha
        22-
        subh se lain mean lag jana tha galati ho gee
        jab talak nambar mera aya bacha kuchh bhi nahian .
        23-
        janm par davat sahi, hai maut par davat magar
        kaise kaise vah ri duniya tere dastoor haian
        24-
        ye ghatoan par ghatean dekho/qismat ki saugatean dekho
        dharati ko jannat kar deange/makkaroan ki batean dekho
        

sankshipt parichay

janm : 18 agast 1968 ko chhatarapur (m.pr.) ke kishanagadh gram mean
pita : sv0 shri purooshottam das khare
mata : shrimati kamala devi khare
shiksha :em0e0 (itihas), bi0ed0
lekhan vidha : gazal, git, kavita, vyangy-lekh, kahani, samiksha alekh .
prakashit kritiyaan :
1. shesh bachi chauthaee rat 1999 (gazal sangrah),
2. subah ki dastak 2006 (gazal-git-kavita),
3. aangaroan par shabanam 2012(gazal sangrah)
upalabdhiyaan :
vagarth, kathadesh sahit vibhinn pratishthit patr-patrikaoan rachanaoan ka prakashan .
lagabhag 22 varshoan se akashavani chhatarapur se rachanaoan ka nirantar prasaran .
akashavani dvara gayan hetu rachanaean anumodit .
gazal-sangrah 'shesh bachi chauthaee rat' par abhiyan jabalapur dvara 'hindi bhooshan' alankaran .
madhyapradesh hiandi sahity sammelan evan buandelakhand hiandi sahity-sanskriti manch sagar [m.pr.]
dvara kapoor chand vaisakhiya 'tahalaka ' samman
a0bha0 sahity sangam, udayapur dvara kavy kriti ‘subah ki dastak’ par rashtriy pratibha samman ke antargat 'kavy-kaustubh' samman tatha layans klab dvara ‘chhatarapur gaurav’ samman .
====sanstutiyaan====
'akela' ki gazaloan mean bharapoor sheriyat aur tagazjul hai . chhoti b di sabhi prakar ki baharoan me unhoanne ne ne prayog kie haian aur ve khoob saphal bhi hue haian . unake sheroan mean yah khoobi hai ki ve khud-b-khud hothoan par a jate haian jaise ki yah sher-
ik rupaye ki tin athanni maangegi
is duniya se lena-dena kam rakhana
 -padmashri d aau0 gopal das 'niraj'
'akela' ki gazal vo lahar hai jo gazal ke samundar mean nee halachal paida karegi .
 - d aau. bashir badr
agar pariman ki drishti se dekha jaye to aj ki hindi kavita ki pramukh dhara gazal hi hai . hindi kavita ke kshetr mean in dinoan jitane bhi rekhaankit karane yogy kavi haian unamean se adhikatar kaviyoan ne gazalean kahi haian aur jinhoanne gazalean kahi haian unamean jo pramukh gazalakar haian unamean shri virendr khare ‘akela’ ka nam bina kisi hichak ke liya ja sakata hai . isaka b da karan yah hai ki ‘akela’ ji ki gazalean vividh vishayoan par hone ke sath-sath bahar adi ki drishti se bhi nishkalank haian . unamean sahaj pravah bhi hai aur amit prabhav bhi . ye gazalean gazal ki yashasvi paranpara mean rahakar ne vishayoan tatha ne pratikoan ki khoj bhi karati dikhaee deti haian . inamean yatharth ki sachchaee aur kalpana ki ooanchaee donoan ke hi darshan hote haian . gazal ka sher agar ekadam dil mean n utar jaye to vah sher hi kya. aise dil mean utar jane vale anek sher is sangrah mean mileange . misal ke taur par ek gazal ke matale ka yah sher hi dekhean -

     “adavat dil mean rakhate haian magar yari dikhate haian
      n jane log bhi kya-kya adakari dikhate haian .”
d aau kuanar bechain

shri virendr khare ‘akela’ ji ka 101 hindi gazaloan ka kavy sangrah “aangaroan par shabanam” padhane ka saubhagy mila . hindi gazaloan ya hindi gazalakaroan ki apar bhi d mean shri virendr khare sachamuch “akele” haian. mujhe hairat is bat mean hai ki shri ‘akela’ ji sachamuch gazal ke mizaj se n sirf vaqif haian varanh unaki 101 meyari gazalean fan ki sabhi kasautiyoan par khari utarati haian .
gazal ki pahali aur aham shart hai sheroan ka vazan mean hona, usake bad radif qafiyoan ka sahi istemal tatha alfazoan ki nashisto-barakhast, jisamean b de-b de ustadoan tak se chook ho jati hai, parantu bhaee ‘akela’ ki kisi bhi gazal mean uparokt khamiyaan dhooandhe se bhi nahian milatian . unhoanne aj ke sampoorn parivesh ko apani gazaloan mean jis khoobasoorati se dhala hai, vo dekhate hi banata hai . unaki vihangam kavy-drishti kal, aj aur kal ka aisa chamakadar aeena hai jisamean jivan ka har pratibianb bolata hai, n sirf bolata hai varanh parat-dar-parat aj hi nahian kal ki haqiqatoan ka parda bhi kholata hai .
bahut lambe arase bad aisa gazal sangrah padhane ko mila jisane mujhe bhitar tak jhakajhora hai, kash aise shreshth gazal-sangrah par “akela” ji ka nahian mera nam hota, isase zyada prashansa mishrit eershya aur kya ho sakati hai .
agale isase bhi shreshth gazal sangrah ki pratiksha mean dheroan mangal kamanaoan sahit-
-manik varma
hindi ke pratishthapit hote gazalakar bhaee virendr khare ‘akela’ ki gazalean bhi d bhare gazalakaroan mean akeli, advitiy avaz hai . lagabhag trutishoony aur sannate ke aandhere ko shabdoan ki rashmiyoan se chirati -
“hamako ai janatantr tere nam par
ustare thame hue bandar mile”

is tarah ke talkh tevar nagarjun, harishankar parasaee ke gady mean bhi
milate haian . gady ko pady mean vilin karati unaki lay ashvast karati hai ki yadi kavi than le to vah jan ki, avam ki pratinidhi avaz ban sakata hai.
 
aj ke bhishan, nirlajj ghotaloan ke kuhase mean ye gazalean jyoti-kiran haian . yadyapi kavita se kranti nahian hoti, lekin vah apane agni-sphurliang to vatavaran mean bikhara sakati hai . ve dushyant ke age ke gazalakar haian . apani pratibaddhata ko rekhaankit karate hue dridhasankalpi kintu sankochi kavi ka shabd-ninad shabdoan ke pattharoan se rag dakar chingari paida karata hai, usaka dav use maloom hai . aj ki dalabandi aur tukabandi ke mahaul mean ‘akela’ ashvast karata hai . gazal aur jan se usake sarokar ghane hote chale jaeange.
 
mujhe poora bharosa hai, hindi ke sudhi samikshak is avaz ko nazar aandaz karane ki sthiti mean nahian hoange . unaki rachana kisi oopari vah-vahi ki mohataz nahian, kyoanki dil ki kaman se nikale unake ashar sidhe dil mean utarane ki koshish haian . ‘aangaroan par shabanam’ ki gazalean sare desh mean lokapriy hoangi, yah mera dridh anuman hai .
-pro. d aau. devavrat joshi


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